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He sighed lowly, wandering off into what used to be his home village. He remembered a lot about this place, and a lot of the people he used to know... his thoughts were interrupted as his foot struck something hard, and Necro was brought to the ground with an "oof!" of surprise, a small plume of dust rising from the charred earth. Shaking his head, he rolled to his back, sitting up and looking back at what his foot had caught on. "What the h.... oh..." he started, his eyes widening upon identifying the object. It was a skull, protruding from the earth, a sad reminder of what had happened here. Necro could not rip his gaze away from the skull; he knew exactly who's it was, and why it was there. He knew what they had looked like in life, in death, and in deconstruction. His horrified gaze slid to the right, only slightly, where another skull lie. Only skulls.. no, he could not lie to himself. The rest of the skeletons buried, thankfully, under layers and layers of ashes and dirt flung this way by strong winds and storms. But.. just the image of the cranium was enough to send a whirlwind of senses and images to Necro's mind, the horrible, rotting smell of death pungent and acrid, watching the faces literally rot away and fall to pieces, the stale blood, the burned skin, the dull eyes, the ravens, it was all a blur. He put his hands over his mouth and nose impulsively, the memories so strong, so incredibly vile, that he was reliving them in his own mind. Tears streamed down his face, and he closed his eyes, attempting to will the horrible picture show out of his retinas, but to no avail. Stronger and stronger these images grew, until Necro could not stand it any longer, and he let out a horrified scream, blindly scrambling to his feet and setting off at a run, though he could not sustain this for long. He fell to his knees, and became violently sick upon the charred and dead earth, vomiting until his stomach was empty. Necro shook his head slowly, his eyes wide, unseeing, fogged with pain as tears fell to the ground, lying upon the burned grains of sand, unable to soak in. He withdrew into himself, on his knees, doubled over in pain as his stomach continued in it's attempts to purge his system, shaking violently.
A little background information

1) I wrote this a few months ago
2) I suck at writing
3) When Necro was sentenced to become a demon, he accelerated the transformation because he was so betrayed, hurt, and angry. Damien took over, and it went out of control. They destroyed the entire village, and Damien overexerted Necro's body. Necro was forced to spend three weeks immobile on the ground, recovering, while the corpses of his parents rotted around him.
4) I still suck at writing.
5) This was just a random peek into Necro's life... type.. thing.
6) Lists are fun.
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Kayragoesrawr Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good. YOu're writing doesn't suck! :O It's amazing. Will there be more? :] I'm a reading whore xD
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AnimeVSReality Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not from this particular... thing, but I'm compiling some other stuff... :blush:
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studiofruke Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Student Digital Artist
1) Ohreally?
2) Pfft, don't lie to us.
3) ...this explains so much. ;~;
4) Don't make me get that Umbridge pen...
5) hm. Cool beans.
6) Yes. Yes they are.
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AnimeVSReality Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
1) :iconyesrlyplz:
2) I do suck at writing. :cry:
3) So much of the story, or just... so much. *fans arms out*
4) Not the Umbridge pen!
5) Pff, beans aren't cool. They're kewl. = 3=
6) I know, right?

;)
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studiofruke Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Student Digital Artist
1) :iconnotreallyplz:
2) You're probably one of the best writers I know personally.
3)... both?
4) 'You must not tell lies. You must not tell lies.'
5) Cooler than giraffes. And giraffes? They're cool.
6) I know Right too, but don't change the subject!
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AnimeVSReality Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
1) :iconimrlynotimpressedplz:
2) You must not know many writers
3) I don't remember what went here hurr
4) Aaaaahhh, noooo
5) :O Impossible!
6) Subject change, subject chaaaaange~
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studiofruke Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Student Digital Artist
1) ...lol?
2) ohpfft. Don't demean yourself like that seriously.
3) lol I had to go back and check what it was about XD
4) YES. >I
5) :iconatnightplz:
6) Nuuuu~! ~D8>
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AnimeVSReality Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
1) I forgot what this one was about too.
2) *demeans self some more*
3) So what was it about?
4) ...Forgot about this one too.
5) ....and this one. :iconatnightplx:
6) ...this one as well. :XD:
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studiofruke Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Student Digital Artist
FFF- -upturns the evergrowing list- Get yo Spongebob on! ...:iconatnightplz:
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AnimeVSReality Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconspongebobplz:
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Ichigo-Naoyuki Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
This made me so sad when I first read it DX
You're an amazing writer too, and the way you worded everything was just perfect.
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JacknBarbossa Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WIN.
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AnimeVSReality Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:blush:
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